My first track to share! Critique me!!

[feedingear]

i think there's some pretty cool ideas in here.

i think you might need to go through and quantise some of the parts as they feel like they slip in and out of time, particularly with the modal stabs.

Could probably back off all the percussion a lot too and let the track breathe a little more.

It might be an interesting exercise to try and strip the tune back a bit and really focus on getting all the parts to move together to groove harder and feel more coherent.

My 2c.

[Barnelby]

I definitely agree about it being way too busy; I'll try to cut down on some of the insanity...as far as the stuff not being quantized, I was trying to go for a really glitchy kind of feel. But yeah, it gets overwhelming at times.

Thanks for the comments man!

[Berni]

Well if you are looking to smash peoples brains then you're on the right path ; ) but I agree with Matt it sounds tooooo busy & a little thin probably due to a lot of compression. Yeah, back everything off & see what really works & what does'nt need to be in there. Sometimes its just as important to take stuff out of the mix as it is to add to it. Just my 2c.