To my polluted ears its sounding a little too upper mid/high boosted for my liking. I know MP3's in general sound like shite and its very difficult to comment on anything except pure wav......
The track is the standard fair for the genre and it has pleasant albeit predictable progressions but ultimately its a bit too forgettable....mixing needs attention and a possible rethink as to some of the sounds used for the instrument/percussion parts.
This is just my opinion. If this is a bedroom attempt then its great....if your trying to release this then you need to improve...but its not for me to say how to do that as im stuck in the 80's
DS