wild

[mitchiemasha]

Ok probably not to the taste of any one here but I've used my virus ti to make a typical fast paced ravey vocal track.

its a bit wild with some serious porto action at the beginning.

If that wasn't anoying enough it's got my voice on it too, to stop the bootleggers putting the tune out before its finished.

I'm working on a second mix which actualy will have a propper cheesy melody to match the lyrics but I'm struggerling to write it, hint hint.

I mixed it down in headphones and 1 monitor as my other one went bang last week. low funds means it's going to have to do for now.

hope someone takes a listen, try imagine loads of sweaty ravers listening to it though please.

http://www.4shared.com/file/24228355...e_Masha_-.html

[feedingear]

Bring on the doof. Sounding nice so far - though I reckon straight away you could slam the kicks and get it driving hard - harder to hear if you arent working on monitors but it feels a little flat. The clicky sub drop is a tad sharp perhaps in the transient too? Synth tones are generic rave but they sound good, could do with a little more life perhaps with some modulation etc. I reckon just focus on making it move around a bit more with your automation to help keep the track fresh.

This brings me back to my first underage raves and a certain substance

[mitchiemasha]

I played it on my hifi downstair and noticed a complete lack of real depth, very flat. It's still all over the place arrangement wise too.

The quality of this style of music is quite low though so I thought incomparrison I aint done to bad.

Cheers for the listen and comments.