new track - suggestions?

[oscillator]

I'd like to have your suggestions on my new easy track to discuss its mixing, sounds and general features. Thanks!

http://soundcloud.com/soulnaut/dub-maybe-01

[suzzymackenzie]

I like the overall mood it creates. Suggest: I would want to tighten up the timing of the mallet melody somewhat. And I was a little bit thrown by the move from minor to major at 1:16 only for the piece then to break quite suddenly - felt to me like that kind of significant change should herald a bigger and longer outburst of some kind before settling back to the core mood.

I would love to hear further versions!

[oscillator]

Hey suzzymackenzie! Thanks for your suggestions.
I think a significant change needs a longer track, and now i'm working to make it richer with some new spices.
see ya