Figured i would throw mine up aswell

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Ok, i am downloading the other track now:

First thing that comes to mind; what a beutiful and very moody intro - I could easily hear this in an horror/drama-movie. just beutiful work on that piano and the pad in the very beging is really going nice with the piano. I am not really sure about those drums - I do like the beat but i feel that the kick is abit synthetic-sounding for this one, i'd go for another type of kick here.

I do like the hihats, but still not sure about those samples either acctually. and i do enjoy those -dddddrrrrrr effects you use on the beat - I've always been a sucker for those types of effects.

Now the bass comes in, which i do feel is abit soft if you want this to be an trance-tune, i'd raise the volume on that one and try to get it abit more 'punchy' - you gotta feel when the bass hits aswell as the kick, these are the things people are listning to on the dancefloor. Then the lead kicks in and it gets another turn; it now goes for more of an Robert Miles-kind of trance, very dreamy - with some more work on this part it could be really nice; add an arpeggio in the background with some panning work and some cutoff on that arpeggio later on (maybe use the an lfo to control it)

Then all of the sudden, the beats starts to sound really odd - it sounds more clear like the have been tweaked before with cutoff (?) or is it my extremly nice audio-system that is acting up again.

Anyways, again now the 'intro'-beat starts wow, i do enjoy those electric-effect on the drums. Those are mad as hell, and would really fit well into another DNB-track or why not make another remake of this tune and make it into more of an psy-trance tune with some effects and so on.

Well, i'll listen to it a few more times and i'll give it a comment later.