I don't get it - have you remastered this then or do you mean remixed? I guessed you mean remixed so here goes...
I don't know the original so can't compare but it seems quite a decent track.
THings I like:
I like the melody parts through out the track. The composition is very good. The mix isn't too bad, although the highs are a bit fuzzy for my liking and the percussion gets lost.
Things I don't like so much:
You may have problems if you press this to vinyl - the phase looks all over the shop to me - probably the highs judging by the patterns.
I am not very keen on the bass sound or the bass line (but I guess the line is stereotypical for the genre). The percussion could do with some work, the hats sound a bit weak and I can hardly hear the snare. The kick could maybe do with being passed through somekind of signal enveloper and perhaps have some very low sub-kicks mixed into it to define it more. The whole percussion gets lost within all the melody parts.
Of course others may totally disagree - I am no professional!
There may appear to be a lot more negatives but really I think you've done quite a good job (its 1 track more than I have finished in the last 2 years!)
Thanks for posting it,
Drammy
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