Ramstein style vocals would sound great!
Know what I mean? Play the song and then sing some heavy ramstein german metal.....Sounds cool
Is that you programming drums? Thats some good drum programming there! Bloody realistic.....Puts me to shame
Once you have some organic sounds in there (ie real guitars and maybe drums?) then I think the song will be sounding nice.
As for the melody....yes it is familiar, but I can recall from a particular song. But familiarity is a good thing, people will be drawn to it....
I like your stuff Juho, it is funny (especially the temporary porn star synths)