Ok. Now listening...
-Too much chorus on the vocals. Sounds like total dissonance now. Also try to add just a bit delay on the vocals.
-Maybe some of the percussion is too much on the top. Would probably work better if mixed on background with heavy short reverb.
-On this track the minimalism works pretty well.
-Probably a bigger buildup is required. For axample around 1:55 a breakbeat and a nice bassline would make this track brilliant. Now this sounds like this is still unfinished.
This track has a potential for brilliant track but this just doesnt progress at all. It's like a loop played on and on. If you'd add a heavy breakbeat with bassline + some additional buildup towards the end (naturally a huge climax on the end with a clam ending, great contrast forces to listen to the track again and again) this would be excellent track. Now it just gets stuck on a marsh of medicoreness.
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