On Fabrix... its got good production values... you put all the sounds together well, it sounded really good on my speakers. It has the makings of something that could start out as a good start, but there isnt enough contrast in the music to keep me listening. In other words, the initial idea is cool, but Id recommend spicing it up more dramatically, not only switching the tempo up, syncopations and such, but also changing the chords that underlie the music... it seemed to stay in the same key for the entire song (which translates into audience boredom, unless they are tranced out, and even in that case... and even then, its better to appeal to an audience that is sober and coherant, cause thats how most people are when they listen to music anyways [excluding in club settings that is] Adding vocals onto it would be HUGE... vocals are a big reason why people identify with songs.
So, my take, good production value, but it loses my ear because the chords / key
never change enough for me to want to keep listening to it. A good example of commericially viable techno is the Crystal Method's Tweekend... take what they do on Over the Line... they have vocoded vocals which iterate a pretty simple hook (over the line) and they change up their harmonies and the general color of the tones. But, in my opinion, they could make it even MORE commerically successful by adding a powerful and Coherent set of vocals (ie, people hear it, and want to sing along with it... noone really wants to sing DJ samples (Go!... Go!... or Do it! Do it!... ya know what I mean)) People want to sing songs about love... or sadness... or breakups... or politics... or ecstacy... etc.
You got the basic idea down, but that idea only works for about 30 seconds... add other melodic lines on top... steer into different keys of music (a good inspiration for how to structure songs is the Beatles, they perfected the 3:30 pop song format) And make techno with pop. You'll make a mint of cash, and you'll have BlakeLight to thank for the advice... heck, once I get my tracks done, I'll show ya if you like. Anyways, like the production values... change the key / sounds more often... add vocals... and you'll get something that more people will like than simply your Drum n Bass crowd.
If you got any questions, Id love to hear back from ya! Peace
-BlakeLight