here is my first track
 

here is my first track!
goa style, 100% virus C except the drums, voice samples and the choir at the beginning and in the break (that was from Angelina VSTi)


http://www.soundclick.com/cosmiclogic


i need tons of comments guys!!!!!

Sounds very good! Maybe could get a bit better if you would add some more EFX on the background.

yeah i thought about that, i find it is a bit hard to make different wierd fx

and thanks juho :wink:

Select Init patch. Control menu -> Ramdon patch -> Set depth to 64 -> press store and test the sound, if you don't like it press store again. Repeat the process until you have a good patch or the patch has ultra high feedback flanger or nasty resonance on filters (in this case load the Init patch again and start randomizaion again).

Caution: Don't use high volume, because if the random patch strikes with high feedback flanger, you'll get really loud sound and you don't want to break your speakers and your ears.

thanks, i never used the random function, i think now it's time ;)

as u probably know by now, its not really the style of music i like....but ill try to be objective.

the intro is really cool, specially like the effects on that vocal in the intro!

everything b 4 the one minute mark i really like...but i couldnt really get into that lead sound that comes in at the 1 min 5 secs mark..after it desapears the track picks up IMO...

i like the sound that comes in at 2min 34...nice driving sound, and it fits really well!

4min 16: nice break down to those cool vocals again! i like this part...really nice dark atmosphere! u definately seem to have the trancie structure pretty much under control...

4min 55 (or so)...like this new sound u have there...creates a groove and is a great contrast to the dense reverb here! also that lead sound at 6 minutes is pretty nice too..everything fits really well in this section!!

well put together track!

the only gripes i have are: its very predictable. as most songs in this style seem to be these days..theres nothing really out of the ordinary.......thats my personal opinion though..

and the 2/4 clap seems to sit a little far forward...(but i as listening on headphones today)...

thanks for the listen hatembr!

thanks a lot hollowcell!! very constructive! i'll keep all this in mind! i think i still have a long way to go :)

ive taken a few more listens recently hatembr as it pops up in my play list everynow and again....i dont think u have a long way to go...u have nailed it with this genre....

but i still stick to my earlier comments though....something out of the ordinary would spice this tune up heaps..

keep the tracks coming!

oh i'm glad u put it in your playlist hollowcell!! :P
as far as the spice go, i'll take a listen to it again when i get my new monitors!!! :) i ordered M1 active, i'll remix it entirely and see what i can change in it, as it will sound ... different.
for the incoming tunes, i already have 3 new i just started, but i'm also waiting for the monitors.... i'll post a link as soon as i finish them!! :wink: